User:Danielleroelse/sandbox

I thought this article did a good job at keeping the sections in an order that makes sense. For example, putting the sections "Reducing Conflict" and "Beyond Conflict" at the end made the article easier to follow. The section on different forms of conflict laid out the different forms in an organized and easy-to-read way. The article also does a good job at remaining neutral throughout. One thing that stood out to me was the "Workaholism" section and it's length. It was much shorter than the rest of the sections and seemed underrepresented. Compared to the "Workaholism" section, "Gender Roles" is lengthy and overrepresented. The topic is relevant, but it is unnecessarily long compared to the other sections. Another thing I noticed was that some of the references are 20-30 years old, so those could be changed or updated. Danielleroelse (talk) 18:41, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Emma's sandbox page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yanke.emma/sandbox Danielleroelse (talk) 16:42, 25 February 2018 (UTC)