User:Daniellleee0982/Illegal mining/Russellmorden Peer Review

General info
Daniellleee0982
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Illegal mining
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Illegal mining
 * Illegal mining

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Daniellleee0982, I really liked the article I found it direct, informative and free of any bias or opinions. If you are looking to build on this article more in the future I thought it might be good to expand on what is being done to prevent illegal mining. Maybe highlighting some international or local organizations who are responsible for going after illegal mining. Also maybe citing examples for illegal mines and their consequences on the environment and community in these areas.

For other smaller edits I would suggest just adding more sources which it looks like you are planning on doing. I found all of the sources that you used so far to be really reliable and unbiased sources. Overall I did not see any problems with that would go against wikipedias guidelines for tone and balance, content, references, or media. The article also meets wikiepdias notability requirements. I hope this helps a little!