User:Danikatm/Artificial nails/Paolaagp Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Danikatm)


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Danikatm.

I was reading your article about artificial nails and here I state the changes that may improve your article.

First of all, your article has some references at first that are not related to any specific part of the article. I believe you are going to use them later but do not forget to put them in the correct place.

I think the division and the sections that you selected for your article are ok. However, I think that maybe for the organization is a better idea to start with the history first and later you can start with the types of acrylic nails and the health risks that you stated.

I see that you repeated one headline. The Nail Wraps one.

Also, I believe is a good idea, when you are explaining how to remove them, to use a more indirect indication because it seems like is a tutorial and I believe that kind of information is not so relevant to Wikipedia. Maybe you can be more general.