User:Danikimmy/Air pollution/Emilyeisinger Peer Review

General info
Danikimmy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Air pollution
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Air pollution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Dani has added a sentence about COPD and how it causes a good amount of clinical lung disorders. I would suggest she defines what COPD is and adds more other information in general.