User:Danikimmy/Air pollution/Esuhanoble1 Peer Review

General info
Danikimmy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Air pollutio
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Air pollution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content within Danis article edits are briefly seen throughout the article but in multiple instances for example one thing she said is "Air pollution refers to the release of pollutants into the air—pollutants that are detrimental to human health and the planet as a whole. " Or "Some more ways to stop air pollution is to stop burning garbage, switch to electric or hand powered lawn equipment, shut off your engine when it is not nessecery. Another big way to decrease air pollution is to switch to solar power. This decreases burning fossil fuels for electric." These examples are constant throughout the arcticle and provide a lot of extra detail. With a clear understanding of the topic.