User:Danikimmy/Air pollution/Mcm203 Peer Review

Based on the bibliography, I suggest more information in the form of sources to be added. The idea of adding statistics is good, as well as suggesting other ways to control air pollution. The idea is there, but more execution of the topic on the Air Pollution Wikipedia page is needed. Citations are good, just include more and briefly explain them as it is a bibliography.

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