User:Daniypink/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Behavioral endocrinology
 * Article Evaluation
 * Article Evaluation


 * Has an alert that the article has issues
 * confusing or unclear
 * lacking context for introductory readers
 * Short intro, does not summarize entire page
 * missing comma
 * estrogen section is a weird bullet list without saying what the list is of
 * testosterone is classified as a male hormone while it is in both males and females
 * says there has been research on the link to aggression but not anything about what the link may be or what the debate is.
 * uncited claim that any man has more testosterone than any woman (do we want to use gender inclusive language? we should at least stick with male and female so it is clinical sex rather than implying gender)
 * going to have to look at the source of this list, (but not touch affection) seems like a weird add.  weird list over all.
 * uncited testosterone therapy sentence, also is increasing testosterone or decreasing? we will never know, because it is uncited.
 * so much about Kisspeptin, it should maybe be its own article. We could summarize or shorten this section if it is moved.
 * needs a more basic definintion
 * formatting a bit odd
 * Thyroid Hormones has a pretty good intro, will check sources
 * thyroxine (T4) and triiodothyronine (T3) paragraphs has no citations
 * order or formation of these sections needs to be changed so the sections under Thyroid Hormones appear like they are under thyroid hormones rather than as their own topics
 * Hyperthyroidism symptoms list needs source, but over all a good section
 * whats Thyrotoxicosis? and weird grammar in Hyperthyroidism in Pregnancy
 * Diagnosis section needs to be reformatted and probably rewriten for clarity.
 * first sentence of treatment should use clearer language
 * Include side effects of medication? idk if necessary or not
 * might want more citations in the surgical procedure section
 * radioactive iodine might need more citations
 * beta blockers should maybe top the treatments section if they are involved in all of them.
 * what are glycosaminoglycans? needs less technical explination
 * potential side effects needs citation
 * causes links to another page so maybe its ok that they are not well explained?
 * should link to the adrenal gland page
 * adrenal hormones section needs citations
 * strange second sentence
 * should link to cortisol page, needs citations
 * just an end parenthesis without a beginning one)
 * weird formatting
 * no citations


 * Sources