User:Danmi17/Asbestos abatement/JSau Peer Review

Hello Daniel,

The sandbox looks great so far! I think your format actually gave some ideas on how to improve my own article. Mentioning where asbestos can be found helps to inform the reader about where potential exposures might occur. The rationale also gives an adequate reasoning for the subsequent PPE section, perhaps you could mention something about the TLV basis for this limit to give you an extra reference since the information given is already similar. I also applaud the inclusion of examples of asbestos exposures from all across the world. 06:34 April 3, 2024 (UTC). Sorry for the delay, I accidentally posted this in your discussion room instead of putting it as a peer review.

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