User:Danmi17/Asbestos abatement/Mtibbs Peer Review

General info
Danmi17
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Danmi17/Asbestos abatement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asbestos abatement

Evaluate the drafted changes
Danmi17 did a good job of adding relevant and important information to his assigned article. I enjoyed his clear personal experience with asbestos abatement methods and the consequences of improper abatement.

One thing that I would suggest would be to add a references somewhere to the section that follows:

"Only a special vacuum cleaner that is designed for asbestos containment (class H) can be safely used when cleaning up during and after asbestos removal. Ordinary vacuum cleaners cannot be used, even those fitted with a HEPA filter. An ordinary vacuum cleaner will expel the asbestos fibres into the room air."

There is also a section about asbestos waste management in "designated asbestos waste disposal sites". I would have liked to see more information about what this means, and maybe even it's own page someday. However, this may be another project for another day.

Overall, this was great work that added meaningful contributions to this page.