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ARTICLE EVALUATION

LGBT Stereotypes

There should be more detail on the cause of differentiation with gay people and religion. This topic should be researched more since someone states that the percentage in adults caring about their religion is 72% and it is 60% in gays. There should be more information the fiction notion of " bury the gays". Where did it come from? Who started that theory? For someone who isn't gay but would like to learn more of how this idea came into stories. This could also include in the "Murder in Violence section. If that section is not detailed enough . They should either put both of those topics together or eliminate one. They sound the same. Gay people always die or have a bad ending and are murderers too? The example of the show of "The L Word" is good, but the example of "Gotham" is just terrible. That whole section could be removed without taking the point out.Even though there is different examples of LGBT explained in this article. I don't think it was necessary to add actress Portia de Rossi in there. There isn't information about her in there except her coming out as a lesbian in the early 2000s. She is an example of a lipstick lesbian, but i don't know worthy of being on wikipedia cause of that. It should just elaborate more on how there are butch and lipstick lesbians. This also includes in the Male Gay section. There should be more information on girly and butch gay men. Not many people know that is even a category. "Sex and relationship" section seems good. very to the point. There should defenitely be more details in the "sex and drugs" section because it is all too vague. There should be more reasons on how besides the drugs, HIV is spread in that commmunity. Also in "Pedophelia and predation" it sounds more of a blame game on how gay men are automatically accused of something like that because most pedophilia is put on boys. Sounds sketchy. On the "bisexual people" section it is decently good. Very detailed. There should be more information on Harvard Shakespeare professor Marjorie Garber theory. It is a very open minded topic. There should be more detail on the negative stereotyping on bisexual men in hollywood. "transgender" section is to the point. Vague but understandable. There should be more information on "Origin and prevalence" This could cross a lot with psychology. Wasn't sigmund freud wrong about many things in his theory? Finally, all races should be included in the "Race" section. The Hispanic section is honestly incorrect. "Machismo" takes over in south american and it is in recent years that they are starting to accept it. They are backed up in the modern world. They are also very religious.The gay community still stays in secret in some of those areas. Also, Africa. There are place like Uganda where if they find out your gay they kill you. All because a law was made by a religious man. Just throwing examples of information that could be put in.