User:Dante0526/Carolyn Finney/I-Chia Wu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dante0526


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 * User:Dante0526/Carolyn Finney
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Major edits:

- Since she had 11 years on acting, you may search more on how she wanted to change her field to science. What make she want to change, what make she decided to focus on environmental issues?

- Expand more on the recognization since she had a lot of publications, you can try to choose some paper that are interested to highlight her works.

- You can add her career path to extend your page.

Lead:

I notice that Carolyn Finney focused more on actor and art throughout her life, then I think you can add her main focus on environmental issue in the lead section to make audience know what she had contribute to science field. Overall, great summery on the lead section!

Content:

Make sure you put as much as background info of Carolyn Finney. (I think the overall content is too limited with a lot of references).

Tone and Balance:

You did a good job on maintaining a neutral tone.

Images and media

Great picture of Carolyn Finney, and it will be interested to put her social media accounts to "social media" section.

Sources and references:

Great amount of referees and sources that enhance the page's credibility.

Overall impression:

Overall, I think the content is a little bit too limited, there seem to have more her background info hanging around but did not included in your page. It will be great if we can learn more about what she was doing and main focus on the environmental issues.