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Evaluation of the Spanish Tragedy
This article initially seems to be a pretty well written because there are facts in the opening paragraph that are supported by citations and there are great number of bolded links for subjects within the article that readers may want more information on. But reading further into the application, once reading into the contents there are a lot of citations and clarification that Wikipedia notes is needed for individual lines. These are key reasons the article is not one of Wikipedia's "featured articles." Though some information may be true, stated facts like, "The play has never been filmed or staged on television" need to be supported by a citation to give the statement validity. Under the "publication" clarification is needed where an editor stated "most evidence" because they do not reveal which sources they retrieved their information from. Within the plot there could have been some expanding on the reasons for Lorenzo locking up his sister the relationship between Pedringano and Bel-Imperia that made murdering Horatio possible since it is a key element to the storyline. The way it is written makes it seem like Balthazar and Lorenzo committed the act rather than Pedringano. Those are just a couple of parts within the play that could use some expounding to give readers a better sense of the storyline.