User:DanyDivitoTargaryen/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Association of Flight Attendants :
 * Article Evaluation: I wrote this article evaluation as part of another Wikipedia exercise.  I linked it below to practice the linking things for when I write the article later.
 * User:DanyDivitoTargaryen/Evaluate an Article:
 * Sources: I have several sources already listed on another sandbox, as well as in a word document. My main source for this is a book called Jet Sex, Smaller sources include the court case between the AFA and Delta Airlines, as well as a journal article referencing the AFA. I am linking the sandbox which has my annotated bibliography for this article.
 * User:DanyDivitoTargaryen/be bold:

Option 2

 * Article title: Sue Drakeford - Airforce aviator and Miss Nebraska 2001:
 * Article Evaluation: There is no existing article to evaluate at this time. She is currently listed as one of the "Wiki Project Women: Aviators" content gaps. Meaning that Wikipedia has decided she is relevant enough to warrant her own article but has yet to receive one. :
 * Sources: There are very few usable secondary sources available for Sue Drakeford, at least so far as I've found. The majority of them are newspaper articles discussing her 2001 crowing as Miss Nebraska. There are however a plethora of 'unusable' sources - blog posts that are heavily opinionated (all in her favor). I fear the lack of sources may hinder my article, unless I find a way to use the blog posts in a neutral way. Which I feel like I could do, but I do not know if that would be acceptable. :

Option 3

 * Article title: Ada Brown - Flight attendant and founder of the Association of Flight Attendants :
 * Article Evaluation: Like Sue Drakeford above, Ada Brown does not have an article on Wikipedia yet. Unlike Sue Drakeford, Ada Brown was not listed as a content gap on the "Wiki Project" list. She may be listed on another, because she was not an aviator but rather a flight attendant. She is one of the founding members of the Association of Flight Attendants, and features briefly on its Wikipedia page, so perhaps she could also be declared relevant enough. :
 * Sources: I have not found many sources for Ada Brown yet, as of right now my main source is a website detailing her contributions to the founding of the AFA. :

Option 4

 * Article title: Betty Greene :
 * Article Evaluation: The article is very nice but a little short, which is surprising because there does seem to be a sizable bibliography following it. That being said, more is needed in almost all aspects. The 'lead section' is no more than a sentence where her birth and death dates are located, and her career is briefly mentioned. However, it is not distinguished as a lead section because the article as a whole is only six sentences. Looking briefly at the sources coupled with what is already written, I believe that at least three sizable sections are possible not including the lead. First, there should be a decent amount of biographical information making up the first section. Next a career section, and finally a section dedicated to achievements. :
 * Sources: Outside of the sources used already, I will likely bring in contextual sources to help build a deeper understanding of Betty Greene's career and achievements. I will begin compiling a bibliography and add it to the "Be Bold" sandbox which is linked under the AFA. :

Option 5

 * Article title: Charlotte Larson :
 * Article Evaluation: Larson does not have a Wikipedia article and I do not believe she is listed as a "missing article." In its stead I reviewed the U.S Forest Service article to hopefully see if she has a place within that article (as a link) since she was the first female Smokejumper Captain for the U.S Forest Service. Overall, the forest service article is very well written. It has a nice lead section and a decent number of sources. Some of which I will begin to look at as contextual sources for her time in the forest service. As for placing her within that article, there is a section on notable members each linked to their own articles. At this time is has ten other names, only one of which is a woman. Interestingly this section also did not feature Mary Barr, the first female pilot for the U.S forest service, even though she has an article. That may be the 'practice edit' I make in the future. There is room there for both of them. :
 * Sources: All sources will be listed in my working bibliography, located on the 'Be Bold' Sandbox and linked below. It is easier and keeps this page more organized this way. :