User:DanyDivitoTargaryen/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Association of Flight Attendants - Wikipedia

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
The Association of Flight Attendants (AFA) is crucial to another one of my potential research/article subjects, Ada Brown. She is believed to be a central figure in the creation of the AFA, reading this article I hope to see where previous authors have placed her in relation to the AFA.

Evaluate the article
To begin, I believe the lead section is a wonderful starting point. I would like to see more, especially if readers are supposed to be able to identify both the subject and key points of the article from just reading the lead. In its current state the subject is identified and understood, however there should be more to better achieve that second goal. The overall writing of the article is good however, there is room for improvement. Many of the paragraphs are in need of review, as they are much too short and lack necessary components. This is an extremely well researched article, there are few issues with the sources chosen, or how they are used throughout. The main issue when it comes to sources, is the occasional lack-there-of. Throughout the article there are claims that are in need of citations, most of which have been identified and tagged by other editors.

Moving on toward the images. The article has two images, one is the AFA seal, the other a photograph from a protest. Both images are useful and relate well to the subject of the article. The seal I believe needs a descriptor for readers. The other image has a nice description, but I believe it could be referenced more in the section it appears in. The 'talk' page for this article hosts some wonderful suggestions and discussions, as well as more simple notifications for smaller changes such as links.

Overall, I do believe this article is a great starting point and has potential to be excellent. There are just some minor citation, structuring, and content issues scattered throughout that can be easily fixed.