User:Danziell/Chromis ovalis/Gunnarmphawaii Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?  (provide username)
 * Gunnarmphawaii
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Gunnarmphawaii/Plagiotremus ewaensis
 * Link to the current version of the article:
 * Plagiotremus ewaensis
 * Plagiotremus ewaensis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Please answer the following questions in detail addressed to the classmate whose article you are reviewing. Remember this is constructive feedback, so be polite and clear in your suggestions for improving their article. We are all working together to improve the Wikipedia pages for the amazing species.

Use a different font style (bold or italic) for your answers so it is easy for the author to see your comments!


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? (Think about content, structure, complementing the existing article, writing, etc.)
 * 2) * Is there anything from your review that impressed you? The description of the fish was thorough.
 * 3) Check the main points of the article:
 * 4) * Does the article only discuss the species the article is about? (and not the genus or family) Yes
 * 5) * Are the subtitles for the different sections appropriate? No subtitles
 * 6) * Is the information under each section appropriate or should anything be moved? Each section is appropriate
 * 7) * Is the writing style and language of the article appropriate? (concise and objective information for a worldwide audience)
 * 8) Check the sources:
 * 9) * Is each statement or sentence in the text linked to at least one source in the reference list with a little number? Yes
 * 10) * Is there a reference list at the bottom? Yes
 * 11) * Is each of those sources linked with a little number? Yes
 * 12) * What is the quality of the sources? Good quality sources
 * 13) Give some suggestions on how to improve the article (think of anything that could be explained in more details or with more clarity or any issues addressed in the questions above):
 * 14) * What changes do you suggest and how would they improve the article? I thought the article was impressive and gave me a better idea on what areas I can improve on mine.
 * 15) * Is the article ready for prime-time and the world to see on Wikipedia? If not, how could the author improve the article to be ready? I believe the article is ready to be published. Could be improved if the author wanted to add more information on the species.
 * 16) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? Provide more information.
 * 17) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Organization and numbering sources along with breaking it up into proper sections.