User:Daphne DSB/Oarfish/MarcelaCurcio Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daphne Binto


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daphne%20DSB/Oarfish?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Regalecus russelii

Evaluate the drafted changes
Considering that there is already quite a bit of information about your organism I think you did a good job at looking at what has already been done and then adding/changing the information needed. All of the changes that you made were linked to source and added valuable information to the section. Your life history edits I think were the best as it really gave a better picture about the history of the organism. I think overall you did a really good job and I think the only thing I would add is images. This edit doesn't pertain to you but for John's section I would just make sure that there are sources included.