User:Daphne DSB/Oarfish/Pqip Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jblythe.bc22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daphne_DSB/Oarfish
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oarfish

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits you made do in fact add a bit more information to each of the sections. I would say that you don't need to define the definition for hyperostoic growth, and instead, can link to a different article. Beyond that I think everything else is fine.