User:Darianoy/Coming Home (2014 film)/Aierz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The username is Darianoy.

The wiki project is Coming Home (2014 film).


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Darianoy/Coming_Home_%282014_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Coming Home (2014 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
They should put their references in the Bibliography, and delete the defult link that inside of it which they did not ues.

The fifth and seventh reference in theri sandbox has error, they should try to fix that if they can.

Since the wiki page does not have much information, everything they are putting in the sandbox is new to the wiki page.

This sandbox looks really good, this is does not look like a draft, this is a finallized article. I would say they can just copy past everything into the wiki page.