User:Darius Crew/User:Darius Crew/sandbox/JackHUC Peer Review

The way you present the information is solid, it makes the information clear and easy to understand. Although, there could be more details in each section, as I think some sections could be better if they had more information. As stated before, because of how the grammar is organized, the importance and subject of the topic is easily recognizable. because of how your edit is many different topics, there doesn't appear to be a lead for the entire edit in general, I think that makes sense as these will be added seamlessly with the rest of the original article. Each individual section is relatively well constructed,

In the Game related Statistics section, this section is the smallest of the ones you have made, do you plan to expand it by finding more information? for the Player Image section, are there any specific examples of this happening, or did the NBA gradually start to oppose this mentality in players? In the NBA Corporation section, could you find more detailed information or quotes on how the players reacted to the changes caused by lockdown? for the IBL Age Rule section, could you add more information on the rule, such as the date or reason it was made?