User:DarkAngelSaraph/Yoruban Mythology/Campergirl3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DarkAngelSaraph


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DarkAngelSaraph/Yoruban_Mythology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yoruba religion

Evaluate the drafted changes
your stories are well written and concise so good job there. I think that you last 3 little statements need some work. They seem to come from out of no where so i would suggest adding some more information to them that helps integrate them into your stories. It also might help to see if there is a wiki link you could add to African Mythology by Stuart A. Kallen in case people are interested in looking at more of the stories.