User:Darr320/User:Darr320/Linguistic Injustice: Education/Karinawurtz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Karina reviewing Darren, Difan, and Jacob


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Darr320/Linguistic Injustice: Education


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This page is very well written and detailed. I really like how there are a lot of citations as well, it adds to the fact that this article and topic was well studied before being published. The formatting in general is good, however, I would put a few sentences under "Effects of Linguistic Injustice" explaining what it is because it just goes straight into the subsections. I would also add more to the education section. This is because I understand that it is introducing the article, but because it is so relevant to the article's title, I would make that a paragraph instead of a few sentences. I also really liked how there were a lot of specific examples from various studies. I have not seen that in other articles, and the statistics and findings really helped me both understand what the article was about and the point being made. I would just go through the paragraphs for grammar mistakes because I noticed a couple. Overall, it is a very detailed and interesting wikipedia page with a lot of examples and resources to back it up.