User:Darr320/User:Darr320/Linguistic Injustice: Education/Toricooper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Difan, Darren, Jacob


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Darr320/Linguistic Injustice: Education
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like that both sides of the issue were mentioned in the Education section. I do think it might be possible to dive further into the difficulty those who don't speak english or who aren't fluent face when all research is published in English.

I haven't read the Ethnic Minority section yet, but please, cut it into smaller paragraphs. It looks very daunting to read when it's only one. The paragraph was very informative and has a great deal of very good information and lots of sources. I mostly just recommend cutting it into smaller paragraphs.