User:DashandMaude/Julia (Sesame Street)/MyUsernameM114 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DashandMaude


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DashandMaude/Julia_%28Sesame_Street%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Julia (Sesame Street)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your changes to the article have improved it a lot! Specifically, your last paragraph on Julia's controversy really helps explain a major aspect of the subject's history in an informative, factual, and neutral way. I think your lead also helps to set up the rest of the article very well. Overall I think your organization and grammar made the article very easy to read. One note I have is that I would have liked to see where your information was cited from. It's awesome that you have such an amazing list of sources and I think if you had your content in the article linked to the sources at the bottom, each time you say something backed by one of them, your edits would be even stronger than they already are!

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