User:Dashdon/Cervical screening/MS2random Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Dashdon or Vlee2013)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dashdon/Cervical_screening?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cervical screening

Evaluate the drafted changes
One thing the article does well is utilizing gender inculsive language eg People with cervices. Overall the information added is relevant to the topic and has good diction syntax and readability. The use of tables is a nice touch for the test management section. The last sentence in the opening paragraph is missing a citation ( Several screening methods ...) on the sandbox draft. Possible that it was already addressed in main article. The second citation for "everything about cervical cancer prevention" has an inactive link. The changes are supported by multiple reliable sources. Consider having sources that are from the last 4 years if possible. Some of the sources used were pre 2016. Good work.