User:Datster504/Technology integration/Rainameyers1522 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Datster504


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Datster504/Technology_integration?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Technology integration

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * The lead has been updated to reflect the work done by my peer. While it does not include an introductory sentence, it does give me an overview of the article body. It is concise and briefly describes the ePortfolio. The only critiques I would give would be to add in an introductory sentence into the lead.

Content:


 * The content that was added was relevant and up-to-date. I believe that contributions are helpful to the overall point of the wikipedia article

Tone and Balance:


 * The tone of the contributions are neutral. They do not take a side on any issues even while dealing with an issue that can be controversial such as Covid-19. All of the information added was purely factual. My only suggestion would be to include the effects that the use of the ePortfolio have had on the impact of online learning and its challenges. There could maybe be a sentence including statistics of usage of a sentence describing how the use of this technology helped to improve any hardships.

Sources and References:


 * The list of references is well done, but there are no in-text citations. I am unsure if any in-text citations are needed for the contributions, but you may want to double check in case there are. You can never be too careful when you're citing!

Organization


 * The information is concise and easy to read. There are no spelling or grammatical errors. It is well organized and easy to follow along with.

Overall Impressions:


 * Overall, I feel that the information that is being contributed is well-written and useful for the sake of the article. It does a great job of providing a specific example of technology that was used to aid in the integration of technology during Covid-19.