User:Daughterofishtar1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The one discussing Cressbrook Dale,

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I hit random, with intent to dive down a Wikipedia rabbithole, but it was weird, small, and interesting enough to evaluate.

Evaluate the article
The tone is generally fine, though some paragraphs would benefit from better transitions. The photos are great, and well placed against the accompanying information. The article is well-linked, well cited, and honestly in better shape than an article about a tiny park in England has any right to be. There do not seem to be people discussing it, but I think the main thing that could be updated is this place's relative position to the rest of England, along with a general grammatical update.