User:Daunyzn/Environmental disease/Ogbobbyjohnson1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daunyzn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daunyzn/Environmental_disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content given is thorough with detail and it is easy to read. It has the sufficient number of sources and they all appear to check out as well. I do not see any clear grammatical errors. Overall it is neutral information with no opinions being presented.