User:DavidMHuang12/Dr. Myron Evans II/YapMel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing user DavidMHuang12's article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Myron Evans II


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Organization
There is a minor grammatical error ("There are current clinical trial...") under the "Research" section. This makes the following sentence a bit difficult to comprehend.

Some sections (Education and Outside Lab Activities) have only one citation. While you don't have to cite every sentence, I would include more citations after a couple sentences or so (especially after stating a fact).

Content
I would recommend to add photos. For example, photos of Evans himself, his lab, or institutions he worked at would suffice.

Under the "Selected Publications" section, it would be great to bold Evan's name per publication listed. This would help readers notice his name out of the numerous other names listed.

Overall, you did a wonderful job with your Wikipedia page and I look forward to seeing your progress!