User:DavidSc165/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
John Earman

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The reason why I choose this article is because the topic is of great interest for me. The article is about John Earman Philosophy debate on the topic of “the hole argument” proposed by Einstein. Later on John Earman proposed a new way of perceiving this argument where he offered a powerful argument against manifold substantialism.x

Evaluate the article
Lead section:

The article has a good introduction because is brief, precise and concise.

Content:

The content in this article is precise, although one part might too much weight I think it’s appropriate because of the context of the article.

Organization and writing quality

The writing is clear and professional and the content is well organized into proper sections regarding the topic of the article.

The article is clear and doesn’t have any grammatical or spelling errors.

Images and Media:

In this section the article does not provide images and media which lowers the quality of the article.

Talk page discussion:

There is no talk page nor discussion between other on this article.

Overall Impressions:

Overall the article is well organized and well written which makes it easy to understand.

The article is well developed but is lacking on Images and talk page discussion.

The article can be improve just by adding images about the articles topic.