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Ray Allen

The Article as it is is almost complete and has almost all the things you should know about but is lacking in the area of the years between him playing for Milwaukee and Playing for the Seattle SuperSonics and it should show the year in which he was traded. Aside from that the article lacked one proper name, Rajon Rondo which was the 4 superstar in that team and a key player for them in all of their title runs and forgot to say LeBron James and Dwayne Wade as players whom he played alongside in Miami. Beside from that the article is neutral cause it shows the ups and downs of Ray Allen as a Player. It has a Viewpoint from a person who knows about the player and the viewpoint is a little overrepresented but it’s pointed in the right place. All the links presented are useable and can be used to be directed to the article presented such as the one named He Got Game about the life of Ray Allen and how he got his nickname Jesus Shuttlesworth which would be used later in his basketball life to represent him. Each fact it’s referred as one with knowledge and reliable and each of the sources the information comes from seem to be neutral and each one comes from the same source but with different opinions and people making changes to the article. The Article is rated in the C-class and all of the small talks behind the article are ones talking about more information for the article and some are talking about how the writer could give the article a turn and talk about Ray Allen’s life outside of basketball more. Wikipedia try’s to discuss the topic of the article a little different to how we do it cause it try’s to talk but not too much about the subject and keep bringing more information and in class we give a lot of thinking to every detail.

The Article is one that talks about the long and good basketball history of Ray Allen and its well detail cause it is talking about every mayor step he took from the start of his NBA career until its retirement which it’s something people likes about reading, that the story keeps developing any reaches its high point and then closes with a good advise.

The Article has almost everything it should have and I learned more about one of the NBA’s most legendary shooters.