User:Davidovic/obro

O Brother, Where Art Thou?
I've added a large plot summary, removed most of the OR and done extensive citations throughout the article. A re-assessment of its B-class status would be nice, although it probably still fits in to that class. Any recommendations on what needs to be improved would be nice, and opinions on the similarities section can be left on the article talk page. Thanks a lot. Davidovic 00:32, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
 * It appears to still be B class, and if you want to improve it further, the next class will be GA class. The article has to go through the Good article nomination process, and must meet the GA requirements in order to reach that class. I'd recommend expanding the lead a little bit more (for guidelines, see WP:LEAD), add fair use rationales for the images that don't have one, add sources for all of the current Fact tags, add a box office/critical reception section, and maybe add a DVD release section if you wish. There are also some inline citations in the references section that only show the URL, consider modifying these to include the author, title, date of release, and the access date (you can use the templates at WP:CITET or look to other film GAs for examples). Once you have done the majority of these, I think it would be fine to take to GAN, and see how it goes from there. --Nehrams2020 02:33, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Great, thanks for the advice :) Davidovic 03:37, 3 November 2007 (UTC)


 * I'd also suggest condensing the plot summary to half its current size. I know that can be galling; trust me, I've been irritated at having to chop out huge swathes of my own finely-crafted words in the past, but as per the Manual of Style for Films, I reckon you should be looking at about 700-900 words for a film of this length. Best regards, Liquidfinale (Ţ) (Ç) (Ŵ) 15:38, 3 November 2007 (UTC)


 * Yeah, sure. I added it at around 900 words, i think, after cutting large amounts of the happenings from the plot summary. In the weeks following it's addition to the article, however, people added those happenings which I'd purposely left out, much to my delight ^^ Thanks again for the advice. Davidovic 01:21, 5 November 2007 (UTC)