User:Davissha001/sandbox

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Brown

Summary The Charlie Brown Article in Wikipedia is a decent article on someone as popular as Charlie Brown. But there are some things that need to worked on in the article. Such as, the formatting and sources. The article has the History of Charlie Brown but it is found in the middle of the article. The history should be found in the beginning of the article so the reader can review the information they already know and also learn new information about their topic. Also, some of the references are found credible but most of them can not be found or are out of date. Me, being a reader, would like credible sources for someone as famous as Charlie Brown.

What am I doing? The article on Charlie Brown in Wikipedia is a pretty decent article with information. But the problem it has is that the format should be changed and the sources need to be tweaked. I’m planning on using the book, Gospel of Peanuts to add information and an actually text source. Also, I’m going to change the formatting of the article. It gives a section to the history of Charlie Brown but it’s found in the middle of the article. I’ll move the history to the first subject the readers read then show examples to prove the history. This way the readers can get more of an understanding of Charlie Brown if they are trying to find out more about him. They will review what they know in the beginning then receive examples the better understand the history.