User:Dawsjw20/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * All Falls Down (I am doing this one)


 * Article Evaluation
 * All of the articles content is relevant to the topic. It is written in a manner which is neutral. Not every claim has citations; it seems that the first paragraph has no citations, and same with the track listing section about the vinyls. The sources look to be reliable. I would not say that the article tackles one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, but I do not see how it would cover an underrepresented population or subject. It could be said that it covers information on a man who is extremely successful out of a historical minority. It does not look like any Wikipedians are currently contributing, as I do not see any recent history in the talk page.


 * Notes to Improve Article
 * An analysis of the song "All Falls Down" will be added to the Wikipedia article, using these sources with information of very reputable analyses, explaining Kanye's different themes and obscure messages in comparison to other rap in his time.
 * Sources
 * EGO PLURIBUS UNUM: HOW ONE MAN, SPEAKING FOR MANY, CHANGED HIP-HOP (JSTOR Database)
 * A Critique of Du Boisian Reason: Kanye West and the Fruitfulness of DoubleConsciousness (JSTOR Database)
 * All Falls Down (Music). (EBSCOhost Database)

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Inland Northern American English


 * Article Evaluation
 * All of the article's content is relevant to the topic. It is written from a neutral perspective. Actually, it looks to me that there is an abundance of claims in the article that do not contain citations following them, which is quite the issue. The citations look to be reliable. I do not see the article tackling one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, as I do not see a way that an article on this accent would bring coverage to a historically underrepresented or misrepresented population or subject. The talk page has a lot of suggestions to be changed. These are for many different things, such as people claiming that statements are wrong, or that specific words to the dialect should be spoken on, or that have completely new sections they want to add.


 * Sources
 * How to Speak Midwestern by Edward McClelland

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Hulu


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article's content is relevant to the topic. It is written in a manner which is neutral. A large majority of the claims have a citation, but there are still parts that seem to be lacking them. The citations present also seem to be reliable. I do not see this article directly tackling one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, but it does specifically talk about its international availability, which could cover the idea of bringing availability to groups which could have been historically misrepresented or underrepresented. There is little going on in the article's talk page, as it seems that majority of people are happy with the way that the article currently is.


 * Sources
 * Amazon, Hulu Led Surge in Ads on TV to Exploit Loss of Sports. (EBSCOhost Database)
 * Ad-Free Hulu Said Off To Good Start, Netflix Impact? (EBSCOhost Database)

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