User:DawsonK1/Developmental plasticity/Madelineholland99 Peer Review

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DawsonK1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DawsonK1/Developmental_plasticity/Madelineholland99_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Developmental plasticity

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the lead looks great! It goes into a lot detail and flows into the other categories well. I think this page really balances out very well. There is a good bit of content for each section. Some of the content is very detailed and focuses on neuronal development. In class we talk a lot about phenotypic plasticity. It may be useful to focus more on this part instead of neuronal development and how plasticity plays a role in the brain. There is a small section mentioning phenotypic plasticity and images. I think the images look great, however, you can add more detail on phenotypic plasticity and more images to correlate. The citations look great! They are very detailed, however, more citation are also useful. I have not really seen any spelling errors however there are a few grammatical errors but overall this looks great!