User:DawsonK1/Developmental plasticity/Wteh Peer Review

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DawsonK1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Developmental plasticity
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Developmental plasticity

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and straight forward, although they are missing a couple citation. I do agreed that the neural development viewpoint is overrepresented but everything else looks great. The image they included in the article is well explained and made it easier for us to understand what it is talking about. Another good thing about this article is that they do include link to other article therefore made it more discoverable, and all of the links I clicked on worked well. I think that the content can be improved by adding more pictures or videos to make it more easy for us to understand what the article is talking about; good thing about the pictures and videos on the article is well captioned and easy to comprehend.