User:Dawson Thornburgh/Machiavellianism (psychology)/Alaynna2023 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Dawson! What you have is great so far. I think it would help as well if you added a little more to the introduction just to make this topic a little more clear. I think that this articles has a good outline but a lot of information can be added. I think it would also help to add more to the etiology section of the current article. Good luck!