User:Dawson Thornburgh/Machiavellianism (psychology)/Leanna321 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dawson Thornburgh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dawson Thornburgh/Machiavellianism (psychology)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Machiavellianism (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think adding a section about how age relates to machiavellianism is a helpful addition to the article. I feel like maybe this section would work best right before the “Research on children” section, since that is where the kiddie Mach test is talked about. Instead of combining these two sections you could talk about the trends in age and mention the differences in kids in your “Age correlation” section, then the already existing section on children could expand on the concepts you mention. If you do decide to keep both sections rather than combining them, maybe looking for research done on older populations would be helpful for the Age section. I also noticed a couple sources in the original article (#30 and #86) are only cited with a link and no author, but the proper citations are at the tops of the pages the links bring you to; I thought this might be an easy improvement you could make to the article. When I checked the links on the original article, I noticed a few sources that were missing an IBSN, so if you have time you could add those in.