User:Day&night19/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Life writing

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This article caught my interest; making it a major factor in wanting to evaluate this article. It taught me new facts that was known knoweledge I just put it into a category.

Evaluate the article
The leading section gave an overview of what's expected. However they introduce David McCooey with no background information on who he is or what he does. Perphaps this was on me missing an section but it was introduce in the begining. This article did not include images to enhance it's experience. Which as a visual learner is not a necessary factor but definitely helpful. While I'm still debating on editing this article or just create a whole new page. My overall evaluation is that this article provides great information but needs a few fixes within.