User:Daytontalbot/Wolfe cycle/Landonsevere Peer Review

I think this is great. Good sources cited, and excellent introduction on what the Wolfe cycle is! You followed the guidelines for creating a new article and I think so far a lot of the peer review topics I'm not able to touch on, because we are just starting but overall I think this is great.

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