User:Dazed09/Ana Pellicer/ArtHistory2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dazed09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dazed09/Ana_Pellicer?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ana Pellicer

Evaluate the drafted changes
You made a lot of improvement to Ana Pelicer's page. Some of the source links were repetitive web sites though, I'm not sure if that is necessary. I really appreciate how you used the headlines to separate information and how it is all evenly spaced out and Im glad you found an accessible image. You made it easier for my eyes to know where to go. Some of the source links will take me to the bottom of the wiki page while others take me to the site so that may need some adjusting.

The [2] link is not working it takes me to the bottom where the sources are but not to the site, it may be an issue with the HTML code and the ones mentioned multiple times are :https://www.academia.edu/329673/Morris_in_Mexico and https://mexicocooks.typepad.com/mexico_cooks/2012/02/james-metcalf-and-ana-pellicer-copper-artists-in-santa-clara-del-cobre-michoac%C3%A1n.html and https://terremoto.mx/en/online/ana-pellicer/ im not sure if that is an issue or not to use them multiple times. ArtHistory2023 (talk)

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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