User:Dbanasov14/sandbox

Friedman Place needs major improvement in citing.

 * Notability is an issue in this article because the coverage of the sources is not significant enough. There is overall one reference.
 * In order for this article to be notable there needs to be an improvement of citing at least every sentence so that readers know whether this is a reliable information or not.
 * The original author of this article seems to have a lot of common knowledge as supposed to factual information. This article is information; however, it is not factual because overall one reference is just not enough for it to be reliable.


 * The Friedman Place article seems to be not independent of the subject. It seems as if the article is affiliated with the author's own knowledge.
 * It is vital to make sure that there is trustworthy information being presented.
 * Perhaps if there were reliable references made in this article it would have been a good article as supposed to article that needs a major makeover.

This article over-all needs: reliable sources, notability, credibility, references after every sentence, grammatical improvements.

source: Friedman Place