User:Dbhatti99

About Me
I'm an automotive enthusiast who loves to drive anything with an engine and I also am my own mechanic. I also enjoying riding my motorcycles and riding my dirt bike off-road. I am originally from northern California and recently moved to the Pacific North West. I also enjoy camping and being outdoors. Being outdoors is a good way to relieve stress.

My Wikipedia interests
If I am active on Wikipedia, I probably would be researching and probably make a page about one of my interests or a specific thing, such as a unique vehicle or an off-road park. I will be primarily using Wikipedia for research purposes and knowledge of mt hobbies. For example I like to use Wikipedia to find out what kind of engines my car would come with in American or European markets and what changes have been made within the different years of the car.

Article Evaluation
For this article evaluation I will be evaluating an article about a Ford Mustang called Eleanor. The Eleanor Mustang is a modified 1971 Ford Mustang Fastback. It was first featured in the 1974 film "Gone in 60 Seconds" and then again in the remake in 2000. However in the remake it was a highly modified 1967 Ford Mustang Fastback. I visited the Eleanor (automobile) article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: the age of the article, grammar/voice, and its structure/completeness.

The grammar of the article is acceptable for the type of information that is being reported however it could use some different wording and phrases. An example would be, the article states " "Eleanor" is a customized 1971 Ford Mustang Sportsroof (redressed as 1973 [1][2]) that features in independent filmmaker H.B. "Toby" Halicki's 1974 film Gone in 60 Seconds.' I believe the words "customized" should be replaced with "modified" to give it a better flow. Also the line "1971 Ford Mustang Sportsroof (redressed as 1973)" should be written as, 1971 Ford Mustang Sportsroof, which was modified to resemble a 1973 model." This way allows for a better understanding and more informative sentence for the reader. It would also help to add exactly what was modified to make it look like a 1973 instead of 1971.

The article was created on 24 August 2006, by Jayetheartist. The article's citations are still relevant because they are dated from the past 2-3 years. The article was also last edited on March 28 2020 with a total of 548 edits since its creation. As far as the age of the article and citations I would conclude that the article is up to date along with the citations as well.

The structure and completeness of the article is good as well. It is well informed about the history of the Eleanor mustang as well as all the little details about the multiple versions used to produce the movies. Besides no information on the changes between a 1971 model and a 1973 model, it it well informed. The changed between the models could be easily added to the article to provide even more information and detail.