User:Dbw~enwiki/Sandbox


 * I agree that the current lead is better than all the proposed alternatives, but I think it could be better still. "Version 2" is obnoxiously partisan, though I do think the rocket attacks deserve a mention.  I like Gaza War for the title.  How about this:


 * I have intentionally left the "w" in "Gaza war" and "m" in "Gaza massacre" lowercase. I have not (yet) seen either of these phrases used as proper nouns.  Arguing over the "symmetry" of each side's justification is tantamount to fighting the war itself... we cannot and will not achieve consensus.  Per User:Jalapenos do exist's arguments above, I only mentioned the Israeli action, which was to launch a military campaign with a stated objective and motive.  Thanks, dbw (talk) 21:30, 15 January 2009 (UTC)