User:Dcampos133/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because it is relevant to my course as well as my personal interests. This article matters because education is not only important but also very divisive.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The leading section seems to have some formatting issues. Due to this, I believe that the leading section goes on for way too long and reads more like an essay or a pitch than a brief but concise intro. This article could definitely be updated with more relevant articles as well as new topics. Some previous editors have reorganized since conception. Has only 2 images, which further makes this article look like an essay. Preliminary impression is that this article takes too much of a stance to receive a high evaluation. The talk page has been rather quiet, but good talk has taken place. I feel that this article could be greatly improved with some reformatting, introduction of new topics, and more images to accompany.