User:Dcfootball/Neonatal infection/UCSFmed2025 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dcfootball, UCSFStudent, Sfjm2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Neonatal infection
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The authors identified an important area (hepatitis) that was not previously included in the page. The authors added a comprehensive and thorough section on neonatal hepatitis infection, which was supported by good quality references. The language was clear and at a good reading level. Areas for continued improvement on the page is to revise the use of gendered language (e.g., changing mother to terms like "pregnant person" and "gestational parent" to reflect that diverse genders can be pregnant and give birth). One additional suggestion is to embed more Wikilinks in the article - for example, it could be helpful to add links when discussing types of viruses (like single stranded vs double stranded and RNA vs DNA viruses).