User:Dclark636/Symbiont evolution in Amoebozoa/Sterling222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dclark636


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Dclark636/Symbiont_evolution_in_Amoebozoa&action=edit&section=1


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very interesting article. There are many citations that need to be added and names that should be italicized. Basically any interesting fact should be cited. One of the sentences in the first section should also be broken into two. I fixed a couple minor grammatical errors throughout the article. I also feel like this article could really benefit from pictures and wiki links to other articles. Lastly, they references should be fixed so they aren't shown twice. Other than that, great job! - EF