User:Ddangeli/sandbox

I chose to edit the Wikipedia Article about the Baroque Trumpet. Overall, the content and structure of the article is pretty well written. I chose to evaluate this article because I feel that it is missing some vital pieces of information about the Baroque trumpet. The article discusses the basic information on the trumpet such as its anatomy and its comparison to the modern trumpet. The article includes relevant information. The construction, use, and types of baroque trumpet subcategories give the reader more insight into the instrument. It briefly mentions Bach and Handel, but the article does not talk about any major works that the trumpet was used in. Also, the article does not discuss the situations where a trumpet would be played. I believe it would be necessary to add how the trumpet was used in both secular and sacred outings. There are two links that I recommend removing. The first is an old website that no longer works. The web archive link does not take you to a specific page discussing trumpets. Also, the Crispian Steele-Perkins interview seems unnecessary. I read through the article and there was no pertinent information regarding the baroque trumpet. Th article is included within the scope of the WikiProject Classical Music. Below I have included a few topics that could add to the article.

•	The two registers of the trumpet: principale (low) and clarion (upper) •	Trumpet flourishing during “high Baroque” era •	The music composed by Bach and Handel for the Baroque trumpet

2600:6C44:E7F:DBBA:61E6:2E4C:58D8:A326 (talk) 04:01, 24 September 2020 (UTC)I have included a few topics for my wikipedia article proposal. The following topics have minor issues as mentioned below.

1.	Homophony •	The article does not mention much about the Baroque Era and its significance •	It needs to offer more musical examples for comprehension 2.	Idiophone •	The article lacks pictures and musical examples •	There is a lack of historical information 3.	Sprechgesang •	It includes Sprechstimme, but combines the two titles •	It offers a very vague description •	It lacks musical examples and compositions 4.	Madrigalism •	It uses the terms “madrigalism” and “word painting” interchangeably and can be confusing •	The article needs more content from the historical time periods, rather than modern •	It lacks musical examples