User:Dddefne/Kurdish–Turkish conflict (1978–present)/Patroclus99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

dddefne


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dddefne/Kurdish–Turkish conflict (1978–present)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- Everything was very informative

- It is clear that you know the topic well

- Some of your language could be a bit more neutral, but it is far from offensive

- You could benefit with adding some headings just for clarity's sake.\

- Be sure to update the lead to reflect the new information added.

- Overall, a great first draft with just a few tweaks to make