User:Ddmiller12/Schema (psychology)/LaDonna205 Peer Review

General info
(Ddmiller12)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ddmiller12/Schema_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(After reading your contribution, Im not sure where you would enter this information. It would appear as if it would have the greatest impact is in the Lead section. The lead section is not brief and it does not contain an overview of the major article sections. The content neutral but it does not accurately reflect some cited sources as Wikipedia has identified that some citations needs verification. I would also reorganize the structure of the article. I would remove the History section or combine the history and the background research sections. I would also re-organize self-schema and modification sections. I would first list the self-schema, then modification, then schema-therapy. My overall impression of the article is that it would need more work on the overall presentation of the topic..)