User:Ddotdalllas/Intermittent fasting/Harpleigh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ddotdalllas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ddotdalllas/Intermittent_fasting?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Intermittent fasting

Evaluate the drafted changes
We discussed the Lead and the sentences that were too specific and belonged somewhere else.

The religious section might be better suited at the very end of the article.

Any updates on sustainability since 2018? If so, what? If not, update that to 2021.

(Harpleigh~)